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all there was was sadness and emptiness and loneliness and not much else

it flowed over like waves over toes and ankles and calves and knees and thighs and hips and fingers and arms and elbows and shoulders and lips and eyes and and and

it’s tingling touch would leave traces of dreams on her skin. dreams scattered like stars in constellations or freckles on a young girl. on her sides and collarbones and across the bridge of her nose

and i

i would spend every waking moment tracing them over—every last one of them

until i could map out her very soul with my breath.
once i did a thing where i posted that if you sent my askbox a symbol, i'd write you something--anything at all

and this one girl sent in a symbol and she got this. this is the very first thing i wrote in 2013

i also re-formatted it and submitted it to my english teacher as a poem because i did not want to write a new one as i was uninspired. i think it worked and flowed better as a poem but meh.

i also don't know and don't care if it's in the right category, okay?
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somethingsophie Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013   Writer
This is so simple and so powerful at the same time.
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Powdered-Sugar Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
thank you very much:heart:
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RestlessSands Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
ive borrowed your title for a found title poem: [link]

;) :heart:
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Powdered-Sugar Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student Filmographer
oh that's actually really cool.
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RestlessSands Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
:giggle: ..:dance:
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have featured this in my journal: [link]
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Powdered-Sugar Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
/)u(\ thank you very much, it means a lot:rose:
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FlinchSaint Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is wonderful.
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Powdered-Sugar Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Filmographer
thank you, it means a lot.
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